雅思考试是常见留学前英语能力测试的一种,备考中,写作是一大**。今天小编带你看:雅思作文8分技巧。
雅思作文如何轻松过8分?
写作任务回应情况
1. 字数达标(至少250字)
雅思作文写的长不加分。而且越长错误可能越多,越容易在语法和单词拼写上犯错误,或会遗漏重要信息,犯错的概率会增加!所以字数刚刚好就*棒了。
2. 不跑题,观点全面
哪些是关键词?问题分为几部分?需要做什么?
举个栗子,
Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
The pace of technological advancements is steadily increasing, suggesting that people need not only to keep up with, but to stay ahead of the competition they want to survive and succeed in the business world. This is a great source of stress for many people.
What are some ways people can relieve this stress while remaining competitive in the workplace?
Write at least 250 words.
(1) 中间的一长段是写作任务的提示, 解释一下具体的情境,以此来展开提问,许多小伙伴常被提示所迷惑,导致跑题。
没有在问你以下内容:
•for opinion about competition
•the role of technology in business
•What it means to be competitive in bussiness
•causes/sources of the stress
当然你可以稍微提一下某个点,以支持文章的架构,但这些内容**不是**,且占的比例相当小,说白了可能就是过场话。
(2) What are some ways....才是写作任务(task),典型的解决型问题,它是在向你索求具体的examples.
问的内容包括:
•ways to relieve stress caused by competition and stay competitive.
这里的竞争并不是**,**是缓解压力,所以一定要学会抓**。
连贯和流畅
1. 文章结构完整
考察考生文章组织能力、连接信息和观点的能力。考生要学会如何谋篇布局,先“搭架”,再“添砖加瓦”。
写之前,应该快速构思一下文章框架,2-3分钟的梳理不仅能使思路清晰,也能节省写作的时间。如:
Introduction (Paraphrase questions& including your opinion)
Body Paragraphs (arguments for the topic)
Supporting point 1(论点1)
Supporting point 2(论点2)
Supporting point 3(论点3)
Conclusion(Paraphrase your opinion)
2. 行文自然
在Introduction段落,通常是要描述题目作为开头,但不是copy题目,而是要paraphrase,所以哪怕是山寨一下,也比直接抄下来好。
判卷规则中有潜规则:如果考生将题目的句子一模一样写在文章中,会有凑字数之嫌,考官会在字数统计中刨除掉!
改写小技巧:
1.替换词
Financial support from government should only be used for scientific research, not the less useful research.
替换词有:
financial support:fund,subsidy,fiscalincome
be used for:be allocated to,be distributed to,be spent on
research: study,investigation
less useful: less valuable, meaningless,frivolous,non-essential
2.翻译改变句型
关键词都替换掉了,但是句型还是没变啊,所以这时候就需要改变句型。
对于语法没那么好的同学可以试着把英文翻译成中文,再由中文去改变表达方式,*后再翻译成英文,这时候你会发现,跟题目中的原文已经**不一样啦!
原文翻译:
**应该花*给科学研究不是没用的研究。
中文改编:
相比于那些不会带来显著价值的研究,科学探索应该得到**更大的财力援助。
*后再翻译成英文:
rather than those studies which cannot bring remarkable value, scientific exploration should be more funded by government.
**没有必要拨款给那些被众人认为没有实际价值的非科学研究。
It is not essential for government to allocate money to those non-scientific studies which can hardly bring practical value.
语法丰富性和准确度
正确时态、语气与语态相结合;使用复杂句;语**确。
1. 复杂句**是“提分利器”!
复杂句是指将多个信息融合在一个句子中,可是很多小伙伴怕写不好复杂句反倒犯错,于是满篇小短句,那么如何比较安全地扩展自己的句子呢?
e.g. Nowadays,everyone has a mobile phone.
扩展时可以思考,who 具体是指那些人?what什么样的手机?why 为什么会这样?就会变成:
Nowadays, people of all generations have mobile phones, especially smart phones, because you can do so many things with them.
2. 小词大用
除了利用发散思维来扩充句子内容外,还可以利用连词补充信息,如用such as,for example,instead of,as well as 等
e.g. Being a celebrity—such as a famous film star or sports personality—brings problems as well as benifits.
敲黑板!!in terms of,for the sake of,regardless of 也是复杂句的"三大绝活"。
e.g.This children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have time for this.
并不是说全篇都必须是复杂句,简单句和复杂句的使用要尽量平衡。如果都是复杂句,考官读起来会很累的,短句可以适当调节考官的阅读节奏。
3. 小词大用
无论你多么“善变”,准确度是关键,先保证句子没有语法错误,在这个基础上,再谈多样性,使用各种语态和句式。
另外,在写大作文时,合理地安排时间,*好预留一些时间来检查语法和拼写错误,否则很可能“因小失大”。
词汇多样性
善变!善变!善变!
替换词汇很重要,有的童鞋一个词用到烂,很容易让考官产生审美疲劳,学会有节奏的替换词汇,考官才会觉得你很有“料”。
1. 头脑风暴,尽可能找出题目中关键词对应的同义词,并在你的文章中使用。
e.g.Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership amd use.
Alternative: other, different
laws: regulations,legislation
encouraged: promoted, supported
control: restrict, manage
car: vehicle,automobile
2. 在平时的学习中,不能只孤立地学习这个词,应该学习词汇搭配和一些词组的固定用法,避免典型错误。
举个栗子,
✘ He is guilty of making a crime.
✔ He is guilty of commiting a crime.
雅思作文如何轻松过8分?相信你已经从以上的内容中找到了问题的答案。