长短句主题句--四六级写作“六项基本原则”

2012-12-10来源 : 互联网

    一、长短句原则

    短句放在段*或者段末,可以揭示主题:

    As a creature , I eat; as a man , I read. Although one action isto meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

    强烈建议:在文章**段用一长一短开头;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句介绍主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式;文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

    二、主题句原则

    三、一二三原则

    1 )in the first place, in the second place, lastly

    2 )to begin with , furthermore, finally

    3 )to start with , in addition, finally

    4 )first and foremost, besides, last but not least

    5 )for one thing , for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

    四、短语优先原则

    两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点;其二、凑字数

    I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.

    I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.

    五、多实少虚原则

    一定要多用实词,少用虚词(比较大的词)。good, nice 空洞,generous,humorous, **art, gentle , warm-hearted , hospitable 形象。再比如:走出房间空洞的词是:walk out of the room

    但是

    小偷走出房间应该说:slip/sneak out of the room

    **走出房间应该说:sail out of the room

    小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room

    老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room

    六、多变句式原则

    1 )加法(串联)

    2 )转折(拐弯抹角)

    3 )因果

    4 )失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)

    5 )附加(多此一举)

    Ms. Pan , an English teacher who has taught us for three semesters,is easy-going.

    6 )排比(排山倒海句)

    一个个排比句,一个个对偶句,一个个不定式,一个个短语,使文章有排山倒海之势!

    Whether your tastes are modern or traditional , sophisticated orsimple, there is plenty in London for you.

    Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such asoil , coal , natural gas, solar heat , wind and ocean tides.

免责声明内容来源于网络,本站不保证所有内容的完整性、真实性和准确性,如有侵权请及时联系,我们核对情况属实,对该内容进行下架删除。[删除申请]

咨询项目,请扫微信二维码。
微信扫码
在线咨询
领取资料
微信扫一扫、长按二维码、点击“在线咨询”,发送项目名或品牌名,立即咨询加盟项目。

温馨提醒创业有风险,投资需谨慎。为规避加盟投资风险,3158招商加盟网建议您在投资前务必多考察、多了解,降低创业风险。

©2004 3158招商加盟网. All Rights Reserved.

3158招商加盟网友情提示:投资有风险,选择需谨慎